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Yellow River

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Image size
1800x1200px 1.76 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/250 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
210 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
May 8, 2010, 5:52:13 PM
Sensor Size
10mm
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think you have a great start, but there are just a couple of things that could be changed to make this photo a lot better.

The first thing I noticed was the saturation. I think it could be toned down just a bit because it seems to be a bit overbearing. This might just be my personal preference, but I'd love to see what the bed of flowers would look like had it been a bit more orange rather than green.

I feel that using the rule of thirds would benefit this photo a lot. Perhaps even cropping it to a square ratio with the model to the right would cause the image to be more pleasing to the eye.

Other than that, I think it's a great photo. You caught this at a great time of day, so your lighting is wonderful. The model and her wardrobe is pretty, and I adore that umbrella! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" title="=) (Smile)"/>